A large number of people are being killed in road accidents every year. Why do so many accidents occur ? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents

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The world has experienced a drastic change in the commute channels

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used in the past in comparison to an increased usage of vehicles in the present.

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to a continuous rise in humans getting killed in

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road accidents. The two top reasons behind

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while driving a car or motorbike, and harsh driving. In my

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, to recover from

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of mobile

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should be banned while driving and proper training sessions should be arranged nationwide to spread knowledge on driving

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, the increasing craze among young adults to drive at high speed on the roads results in irresponsible driving and

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number of vehicle collisions. To overcome

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situation, the transport authorities should arrange webinars and educational sessions across the nation, to educate the youth on driving

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