Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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the government have to manage the budget that gets from the citizen and pays tax for them for developing the country
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as infrastructure.to make citizens access the infrastructure, the
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thing the government should do is develop transportation to connect the route for transit and access to public utilities.
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, water and electricity for living. they have to spend money on developing the transportation system in the
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priority plan. in general, making the route by building the roads can solve the transport problems
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as for making a convenience to export goods or parcel to another place and for giving more options for choose when the
people
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transit. for my country,the government have a policy to supported to buy the
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first
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car
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by giving a discount 100,000 bath for buying the
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first
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car
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.
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policy makes to change
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to use a
car
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to travel to another place and makes
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option for driving the most popular for chosen. include, the pracademic of COVID-19 are changing
people
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's behaviour come to use the
car
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avoiding to close with other unknown
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from using public transport together.
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, in the present, we have to be aware of other sectors.
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, the air pollution from the dust caused by fuel for using cars, the global warming crisis and the war that make the price of petrol very high. using public transportation
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as Skytrain or metro train is be advantage than using the personal
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because they have lower cost, are faster and can avoid the stress of traffic
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in rush hour.
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, the ministry has the co-ordinate with the private companies to expand the route for sky train to connect with another province in Thailand in the future. to conclude, these two options have the same importance to the population in my country equally. because we are still in trapped the middle income which means not everyone can handle the expenses of a personal
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. while the Skytrain and MRT are very convenient to travel in the cities and come to other cities.by the way,
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is the personal reason for citizens to decide which option is the best one for themselves.
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  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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