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Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information beacuse they have more influence than other forms of media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#newspapers #information #beacuse #influence #forms #media
It is suggested that
newspapers
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 way to get
information
in contrast
 to other means of
media
.In fact,
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off
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 the opinion of considering
newspapers
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 far more domination over the round of
media
.
To begin
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critical
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 role of
newspapers
 as a principal medium of moving
information
 should not be overlooked.One major argument has to do with
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 prolonged usage of it for a century.Despite having
chance
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 of being informed online,companies
such
 as NEW YORK TIMES could gain
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ground around the world regarding its trustworthiness.Another factor seems to be that,
newspapers
 have a wide range of employees including journalists,editors or distributors that work constantly as their business is relied on updating the latest data
hence
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delivering
delievering
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delivering
 quality news and
information
.
However
,there is a strong case to be made that persistent
dependancy
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dependency
 on
newspapers
 promotes rather negative aspects.A case in point is mostly young people wary of news corporations and strive to get more reliable
information
 through varying
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media
.
Furthermore
,youngsters reckon the newspaper to be distorted and fabricated since the aim is mainly directed to make sponsors happy.
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 is reflected in the fact that having
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in
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 sponsors and commercial incomes, important stories are not released directly in order to maintain earnings from advertising.And
newspapers
 will have a reverse position with other reliable and
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convenient
convinient
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convenient
 means of
media
such
 as Podcasts,Videos including
You Tube
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,Facebook or TV.They confer apparent benefits in terms of free charge,
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convenience
convinience
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convenience
 as well as listening whenever of importance. To conclude,since visible adverse can be seen in advertising bias and the probability of limited and insubstantial data,there will not be seen a decent influence by
newspapers
 thereby replacing its position with other modes of mentioned social
media
.
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