Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.To what extent is this a positive or negative development?

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digital era, it has become easy to download music and books, protected by copyright, for free from the Internet. I believe
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development is a negative one for several reasons. One possible drawback of
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tendency is that authors do not benefit financially.
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, when internet piracy becomes widespread,
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would not buy the products of authors due to the possibility of getting them free of charge.
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, in turn, demotivates the artists and novelists
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, from pursuing their
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further
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, for the
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decade, the overall amount of money collected by official sales of movies and music has declined due to excessive cases of copyright infringement. On top of
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,
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tendency is a huge disrespect to authorship and
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the efforts
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that people put into their work. The originality of products
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a great deal of work, insomniac nights,
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and psychological
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pressure. These cannot be fulfilled only by financial resources, but only by showing emotional respect and solidarity.
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, I think,
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trend of free download of materials has become nothing but a huge disrespect.
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,
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is a huge crime which is not welcomed by most European countries, as
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internet piracy is a violation of not only officially acknowledged legislative laws, but
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a violation of intellectual property, which is considered to be far more important than the materialistic property. In conclusion, the possibility of copyrighted materials
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downloaded for free is a huge negative due to
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the financial
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crack of authors and
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the emotional
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damage they get.
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