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Also there are lot of translation software available learning a language could be advantages so what extent do you agree or disagree

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Undoubtedly, in
this
 revolutionized era, plenty of transitional applications are available in order to perform automatic language translation .
Hence
, it has been contended that the human
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intermediator
 will no longer the required .I agree with
this
 statement up to a small extent. since emotion and feeling will fade away.
To begin
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this
 intelligent era, we are surrounded
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extraordinary translation software
such
 as Google
Translator
 .number of people are using the software for
interpretation
 .
interpretation
 of the different languages while going to a aline places
for instance
 in India ,not all the people are familiar with world's local language ,English and countries official language ,Hindi and
therefore
 a person from which w is in the Northern direction can communication easily with the native of the Kerala which is located in the south by using Google
Translator
 due to which one can take human
interpretation
 necessary now.
Conversely
 ,how a machine can complete with a human while
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 emotion and feelings that are highly
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Moreover
, mo the
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 are highly
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pragmatic
 and there is no blunder while
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one of the biggest down. Moving
further
, there some other problems are
also
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 same word has countless meaning and sometime Unadmirable outcomes can be faced.
therefore
, it will create misconception and out to site and example in the case of any
interpretation
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undoubtedly
, these
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deeper which is a boon for their society ,but I believed to get a realistic behaviour human
translator
 can never ever be swapped.
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