some children spend hours every day on smartpphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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museums

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vital role in saving valuable artefacts and directly reflect the

history

of a certain country or a nation by exhibiting

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, that are belong to the past.

However

, some people find

museums

boring and not interesting

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at all,

therefore

, they think that exhibitions ought to be more

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. While others convince that museum is

only

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place for education.

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thought and will discuss both

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views.

Firstly

, redeveloping the historical

places

to the entertainment facilities will affect

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the number of interested in learning

history

.

In other words

, the subject called

history

and all things that are connected to

this

- makes people bored.

However

, the correct approach

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teaching might change the old attitudes.

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, if our

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government

goverment

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government

and teachers were

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the method of educating

history

, it would positively affect the

students

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treatment. Making the process of education more enjoyable is

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good way to both

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leisure time and

learning

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new about

history

.

On the other hand

, the main purpose of

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history

is to look at

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past experiences and learn a lesson along with trying not to make the same wrong decisions in the present,

thus

, converting

museums

into entertainment

places

will devaluate

it

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.

Initially

, historical

places

are made for sharing and saving important information, not for having

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fun. To illustrate, if

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society

asociety

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society

a society

perceives those

places

with

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joy, the value of the past will significantly decline. In my opinion, it should be taken seriously,

accoringly

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accordingly

according

, the

primarly

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primary

aim of

museums

is to educate. In conclusion,

this

essay

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discussed both views,

such

as changing of

attitutes

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attitudes

by introducing

joy

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and the initial purposes of the historical

places

. From my point of view,

museum

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ought to remain the same,

besides

, their aim must be to educate, not

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a

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fun.