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Creative artist should always be given freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish.There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#artist #freedom #government #restrictions
Freedom
 of expression ought to be given to
artists
 who make or
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perform
peform
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perform
 art creatively as well as there should not be any restrictions from citizens or the state. I partly agree with the given idea as it can cause both negative and positive developments.
To begin
 with, the reason why governments or civilians should restrict the
freedom
 of
artists
 is that the art performed or presented should not disturb the healthy environment in societies.
For instance
, the government of India has certain laws that were established for
artists
 and all performance art should go through a censor check before they realised to the public. In
this
 way, not only they can mention a peaceful environment in society
also
 some
artists
 may not take advantage of their
freedom
 to themselves express.
However
, in a few ,aspects
freedom
 should be given to painters, movie stars, and other artmakers because they can convey imperative messages to the public creatively.
For example
,
last
 year,there was a drawing that was trending on social media because it was conveying a message to the public about the importance of planting trees. After seeing that post, starting from school students to senior citizens started to plant trees near their residences and they tagged their pictures on the post. In conclusion,
although
artists
 without restrictions can disturb a peaceful environment among the public, to some extent
freedom
 for creativity can
also
 bring positive outcomes to society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freedom of expression
  • cultural advancements
  • societal norms
  • push boundaries
  • censorship
  • stifling creativity
  • public sensitivity
  • cultural values
  • offensive content
  • impose strict restrictions
  • creative freedom
  • incite hate
  • artistic expression
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