More and more plastic waste has polluted cities ,countrysides and oceans. What problems does it cause ? And what measures can be taken.

There has been a rising number of
plastic
wastes in towns, oceans, and even rural areas.
This
is the major cause of many problems namely air pollution, coral reef destruction and even leads to sea animal distinction. In order to manage the
waste
, some
people
wrongly burn the
plastic
waste
or even bury it underground. In doing so the
waste
releases gases that could deteriorate
people
's health
such
as carbon monoxide and causes contaminated air. It would be dangerous for both humans and other land-living creatures and could even put them to death. Since water animals can't distinguish between real food and the
waste
thrown underwater, they might somehow consume or swallow it which could be harmful to their
lives
. Not only that
this
could be the reason for the loss of
lives
under the sea but
also
it has troubled the
lives
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cycle of coral reefs by damaging the underwater environment. Local governments and central ones should work together to deal with
this
problem mainly to recycle
plastic
waste
and for
public
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to reduce
the
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use of it. One foundation to cope with
this
problem is to educate the youth to use less
plastic
waste
.
This
is to avoid having more
plastic
garbage in the future.
Also
, applying the polluter pays principles
into
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reality and everyday
lives
for example
when collecting garbash, whoever gets rid of more garbashes pays more taxes so that
people
could limit the usage of
plastic
. Environmental classes shall be taught in public spaces to give
people
information to take care of the environment. Activities on garbage collecting should be held regularly to clean the areas. To summarize I believe that with the collaboration of many sections including governmental levels, personal levels and municipalities the number of
plastic
waste
will be under
controlled
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and that the upcoming problems can be handled well.
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