you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear Chathuranga, Hope

this

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finds you well.

First

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of all, let me thank you for inviting me over to your place to have

such

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a wonderful holiday. I really had a quality time, thanks to you and to your family. The food was excellent, as we experienced together when we were at school. Pal, I just realized I have forgotten my wallet at your place, and I remember keeping it in the left drawer of the cupboard that you have in your visitor's room. I can't really believe I just forgot it there. Can you please collect it from there, and if it is convenient for you can you please handover it over to my sister who is working at the general hospital? I can collect it from her. Sorry. for troubling you. Let me finish here. Thank you again for helping me to go back in time and cherish our childhood memories. Best wishes, Supun

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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