1. In the last decade there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think its is a good thing?

In

this

, recent times,

people

prefer to commute by

air

than, other means

such

as

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land and water travelling. And ,

this

seems to be the easiest and safer means naturally. There are reasons behind

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idea and

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essay will discuss it and ,

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I will say my own view.

Initially

,

people

do not travel by

air

but rather by land and water with the use of a canoe. But now companies see

this

means as the easiest and safest route. the few reasons behind

this

could be pointed to insecurity, road traffic jam and

also

people

travel through aircraft means just to show off how wealthy they are. The rate of insecurity in some parts of our country is alarming , folks get scared travelling by road because of the arm robbery attacks and kidnappings. For ,example, a business person who wishes to route by road to purchase goods and gets attacked by these arm robberies extorting all funds in possession, will make one feel devastating

thus

affecting the capital of

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such

business. Again, traffic congestion

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is the most alarming and because of

this

, some groups prefer travelling by

air

over any other means. For ,example, it only takes a

flight

from Owerri to Lagos or Abuja for 30 minutes and one-hour intervals respectively to get to their destinations.

Furthermore

,there are places where commuting by

flight

is a necessity

for example

flying to distant areas

such

as London, the USA and other far countries ,especially for tourism and business. Despite the advantageous side of it ,

this

increased use of

flight

attributes to climate

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which

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more harm than good in

people

's lives and the extinction of our animals. Travelling by

flight

could be the fastest but could become disastrous, facing some

weather

challenges

such

as turbulence

this

could endanger the lives of

people

thereby resulting to death

thus

reducing the world's population.

Nevertheless

,

this

tragedy could be avoided if government and companies provide adequate services for these technologies. Moreso monitors their

weather

through

weather

forecast. To sum up, having stated my points I believe that travelling by

air

is convenient, accessible and faster. Most tragedies could be avoided by the use of proper service and

weather

forecasts. Unlike travelling by other means without having a clue of what could happen at any point.