Fossil fuels, such ad coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, has been encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a negative development?

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With the advancement of technology, there are abundant sources of
energy
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and people have their own choices to use the
energy
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to make living even better. The most commonly consumed
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was mostly sourced from fossil fuels.
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, in some other countries, due to huge concern for the natural environment, people tend to use other sources of
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like solar and
wind
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power
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and from my point of view, I feel it is a positive development.
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is because, in the
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place, the using solar and
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are free of cost as it generates from nature. Unlike man-made energies like coal and oil, it doesn't need to procure or require effort to produce air and sun
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set up equipment expenditure and work. Since the source of
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is free and gifted by nature in abundance, one can set up
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or solar
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at any time.
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, It is eco-friendly and free of air and water pollution. Using solar and
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power
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not only reduces the expenses but
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generates
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in a harmless manner for the environment and people.
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, since it generates
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in large, the benefit is at large to society at a cheaper rate. Overall it helps to make life even better and more comfortable uniformly. Having said that, it
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possesses negative development as well
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as destruction of the environment while constructing the structure.
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, while Bhutan looking for construction of solar
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in one of the states, it has taken around 30 acres of land which repercurred in
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losing
the pasture land for farmers. So it
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costs loss to the farmers and animals due to the destruction of the forest.
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, in nutshell, the positive impact weighs higher than the negative developments and
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