You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them

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Dear Mr Chen, I am Rona Lyn Olivar, one of the part-time receptionists at your Sea View Hotel. I have been working here since July and I have taken the job to gain some experience that I thought would be helpful for my future career. I am writing to draw your attention to a few issues I have encountered in the hotel. I am hoping that you would take steps to solve these. I have noticed that some of the duty staff on the night shift sleep inside the hotel's quarter

instead

of being in the reception area. Literally, I and Lindsay, who am

also

a new employee, work and manage everything at night. They even do not bother to come to the reception area at busy hours when we have an influx of guests - usually on Friday nights. I believe

this

is against the rules.

Moreover

, breakfast is supposed to be ready before 7:00 am but it is not the case. Sometimes the guests have to wait till 8:00 am for breakfast to arrive. Some of the guests have lodged complaints regarding

this

. I thought you should be notified about these irregularities. Duty officers on the night shift should be reprimanded and warned so that they execute their duties.

Besides

, look at the recent complaints regarding the delay in breakfast serving and talk to the head chef. I look forward to your response regarding

this

matter. Yours sincerely, Rona Olivar

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