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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbook has become obsolete. Therefore, university should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion on this.

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These days, we could access any kind of details on the Internet. One of the examples is study
books
, which are available in electronic format. There are some drawbacks to
this
 technological innovation.
However
, I think
this
 obtaining
information
 from the websites is in favour of us in many ways. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss some related benefits and downsides of
this
 subject. On the one hand, the main positive side of
this
 implementation is to access and store the soft format of any document on a smartphone or a computer.
This
 could be helpful for many who cannot carry many hard copies of the document which they might need to refer to during their study or work.
For example
, a student can save a number of digital
books
 on their mobile to read them but on the other side he/she cannot carry similar physical
books
 along with him/her in all the classroom lectures.
Secondly
, since it is internet-based technology, we can get any
information
 with just one search click. On the other ,side
this
 kind of
information
 lookup is quite complicated when we choose the real
books
.
This
 advances our approach to avail
information
,
moreover
,
this
 technique is more time effective than looking for certain
information
 from many hard
books
.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of
this
 like losing personal touch with real
books
 refer to digital ones. Studying with physical
books
 keeps you connected with the story or the
information
 you are reading.
For instance
, a study by The EBL on 1000 students about distinguishing the understanding of the student from the eBook and real book. And the result is a fever of physical book readers.
This
 means that those who refer to eBooks are not able to get thorough
information
. In conclusion,
although
 there are some negative aspects of accessing
information
 through the online medium, I believe that there are many advantages of
this
 invention like effortless access and searching the
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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