Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold different opinions about violent scenes in films on television and at the cinema. While some individuals think that the government should not have control over the

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, I vehemently oppose

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why people counter the idea of regulating the

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violence

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in movies.

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of all, there is a part of cinema enthusiasts who enjoy the high intensity of a cinematographic work. These viewers see violent

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as a stress reliever so for them, these particular parts of a movie are indispensable.

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, films without brutal

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appear to be not appealing to some audiences.

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would lead to the

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reason, which relates directly to the financial aspect of producers. As the interest in nonviolent movies decreases, there would be a significant loss in

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affects the reputation of these moviemakers.

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scenario encourages producers to add more violent

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to their cinematic works.

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to the idea of a non-restricted violent

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in films, I strongly believe that the extent of

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should be regulated by the government. The main reason for

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opinion of mine is the terrible effect of brutal

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on

children

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. Without any kind of regulation,

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different ages would accidentally engage with inappropriate content which would have a bad influence on both their mental health and their

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. Studies have shown that violent

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in movies could lead to violent

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children

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since they have the tendency to imitate what they see.

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, the mind of young

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which is not fully developed yet can be haunted by violent scenes and

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in various mental issues

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as phobia and sleep deprivation. In conclusion,

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it is still debatable whether the government should modulate the

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of

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in cinematographic works, I would adamantly claim that the regulation

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violent

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is indispensable.