In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many nations around the world, more and more
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are becoming addicted to
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stories on television and in books.
Although
people
are interested to watch those kinds of
crime
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because they can get suspense, in my opinion, it has a detrimental effect on
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society.
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violent movies or
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read the
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books is
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most
people
have an innate curiosity.
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crime
is something that rarely happens to us and we hear about it all the time in newspapers and on television.
Furthermore
,
people
like suspense and are eager to know the modus operandi of the criminals.
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, we often assume that we are
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a detective
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detective
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and eager to solve
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problems when we read or watch
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crime
fictions
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fiction
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.
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, those stories
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popular among the
people
in today’s world.
However
, I am of the view that
crime
fiction has both positive and negative aspects. It makes
people
aware of the dangers they face.
For instance
, some fictions seem to
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enlightenment to
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the audience
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how
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to protect themselves or how to avoid crimes they face.
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the other hand, it encourages them to commit
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violent
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in some ways as they can draw fresh criminal
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ideas
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from
such
stories and books. To sum up,
people
enjoy
crime
fiction because they are intrigued by its suspenseful plots and
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details. In my opinion,
this
trend has both negative and positive effects. It makes
people
aware of the danger they face but at the same time, it
also
gives ideas to
people
with criminal minds.
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