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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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In many nations around the world, more and more
audience
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 are becoming addicted to
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 stories on television and in books.
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people
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 are interested to watch those kinds of
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fictions
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fiction
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 because they can get suspense, in my opinion, it has a detrimental effect on
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society.
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 with, one reason why they want to see
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violent movies or
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read the
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 books is
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 most
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 have an innate curiosity.
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crime
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 is something that rarely happens to us and we hear about it all the time in newspapers and on television.
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,
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 like suspense and are eager to know the modus operandi of the criminals.
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, we often assume that we are
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a detective
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detective
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 and eager to solve
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problems when we read or watch
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crime
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fictions
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fiction
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.
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, those stories
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 popular among the
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 in today’s world.
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, I am of the view that
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 fiction has both positive and negative aspects. It makes
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 aware of the dangers they face.
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, some fictions seem to
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enlightenment to
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 to protect themselves or how to avoid crimes they face.
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 the other hand, it encourages them to commit
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violent
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 in some ways as they can draw fresh criminal
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ideas
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 from
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 stories and books. To sum up,
people
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 enjoy
crime
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 fiction because they are intrigued by its suspenseful plots and
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 details. In my opinion,
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 trend has both negative and positive effects. It makes
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 aware of the danger they face but at the same time, it
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 gives ideas to
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 with criminal minds.
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