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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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In many nations around the world,
people
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 are becoming more addicted to
crime
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stories
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 on television and in books.
People
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 consume
crime
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fiction
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 because of its shock value;
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, in my opinion, it has a detrimental effect on society. As we have an innate curiosity about
crime
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.
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 is probably because
crime
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 is something that rarely happens to us and yet we hear about it all the time in newspapers and on television.
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 builds curiosity. We are eager to know the modus operandi of the criminals. We like suspense and twists. When we read
crime
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fiction
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, we often assume ourselves to be the detective. We are eager to solve the
crime
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. These
stories
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 cater to the needs of
people
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;
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, we read or watch them. In my opinion,
crime
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fiction
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 has both positive and negative aspects. It makes
people
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 aware of the dangers they face. At one point, I used to watch the series
Crime
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 Patrol on television. I found the
stories
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 gripping.
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, exposure to
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stories
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 may make
people
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 anxious about their safety. Excessive exposure can even make them depressed.
Crime
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fiction
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 influences potential criminals too. They can draw fresh criminal ideas from
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stories
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 and books. The overall effect is both positive and negative. In summary,
people
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 enjoy
crime
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fiction
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 because they are intrigued by its suspenseful plots and gory details. In my opinion,
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 trend has both positive and negative effects. It makes
people
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 aware of the dangers they face but at the same time, it
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 gives ideas to those with criminal minds.
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