In many cities the population is increasing. Some say that the urbanisation process denies us knowing our neighbors, and this causes a loss of community sense. What is the main problem with this? What measures can be taken to overcome it?

In our globalized world, most
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people
claim that overpopulation has been experienced in both developing and developed
countries
. Due to
this
reason,
people
don't even know their vicinity and it is
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of the lack of communication and friendship among the society. The
first
problem of
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could be
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of facilities
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as
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system or medication
centers
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for some human beings in
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rural places. The number of studious
people
has been increasing nowadays. Because of
this
reason more and more youngsters want to be taught with
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better quality of education, so they are forced to move into the cities. Another cause is the scarcity of
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healthcare service which is the most important one. There are not enough medication facilities in the countryside or the areas which
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far away from the cosmopolitans. In order to
this
, most of the
people
aren't able to have a good service and have to go into the
centers
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of the
countries
. Actually, there are
also
solutions for
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of
problem
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. Learning has been a significant issue all the time,
however
, to tackle
this
hardship the governments ought to take into consideration
to build
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strong
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base for the learner whenever and wherever. In
this
way, many
countries
get rid of the overcrowding and hustle and bustle. When it comes to
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medical service, the states
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paly
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a leading role again. They have to
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a measure to solve a difficulty. The more healthcare
center
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, the
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communities get into the cities. To sum up, sometimes
people
who live in the villages are faced problems that insist them to leave their comfort zone, but there is always a solution to overcome. If these steps are taken by
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, it will be affecting the societies in a positive way and plus help to
developed
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of
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the
countries
.
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