Cyclistis and car drivers sgaring the same roads cause some problem what are the problem and what can be done to reduce the

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As we know, the cyclist and four
wheeler
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wheelers
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share the same roads which can
cause
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some
of
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the
troubles
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trouble
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.
this
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essay is an attempt to discuss the
cause
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and the solution of
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given notion along with the suitable measure to
combact
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combat
it in the subsequent paragraphs prior to the meaningful conclusion On the one hand, there are plenty of reasons causing
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problem.
first
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and foremost the bicycle
do
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not have any type of horns
and
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or
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lights
in
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which the
car
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driver's
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drivers
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do not aware
about
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of
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the cyclists which may
cause
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the
misshappening
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mishappening
miss happening
.
secondly
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, the
four wheelers
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four-wheelers
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vehicle
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depend upon
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machinery but the bicycle
depend
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on
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human being .
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, the
car
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driver
face
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the
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difficulty while driving because cycling move
with
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at
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the
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a
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very
low speed
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low-speed
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.
thus
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,
this
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cause
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major accident.
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, there are
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myriad
ways to deal with the given notion .to start with ,the government should expand the road with the help of
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, they drive
there
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vehicle
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a vehicle
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on the separate roads. the lawmakers give some restrictions on the
car
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drivers and they must
be start
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the public
vehicle
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for the strata of the society in which all the individual ride on the public vehicles and usage of
private
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the private
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vehicle
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become less. to site an example ,Ho Chi
minh
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cuty
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city
has imposed a congestion charge to discourage motorists from entering the City Centre during the rush speed. To
escapsulate
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encapsulate
, it could be concluded that
,
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apply
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the cyclist and
car
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driver sharing the same road which may
cause
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some problems
however
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, it can be curbed by the above mention solution.
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