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Work is being done on street where you live .the noise is disturbing you.write a letter of complaint to local council .in your letter Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solution to the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Supun who lives on the 2nd cross street, and I have been living here for 10 years now. I am writing
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 to bring your attention to a noise disturbance that I am experiencing in my quite calm neighbourhood.
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 with, let me explain the nature of
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 problem. Starting from
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 week, there are some modifications going on the pavements of the street. The workers use heavy machinery to dig the holes in the pavements, and it is too much noise which is hard to bare. We complained several times to the community hall, but there was no response,
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 of
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 behaviour I thought in write to you. As a solution for
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 issue, I suggest arranging
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 work only in the daytime, because most of us are working at that period of the day, we may not feel any disturbance. I would appreciate your immediate attention to
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 matter, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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