Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many crucial morals and responsibilities schools and parents should

instill

Change the spelling

instil

show examples

in children from a young age. These responsibilities are divided into collective and personal ones.

This

Linking Words

essay will discuss

community

Use synonyms

work as a collective responsibility for

teenagers

Use synonyms

and whether

its

Replace the word

it's

it is

show examples

beneficial to the

community

Use synonyms

or not. Encouraging children from a young age to take

advantages

Fix the agreement mistake

advantage

show examples

of their free time and spend it

to do

Change the verb form

doing

show examples

something beneficial for a healthy up lifting childhood.

This

Linking Words

factor will help children to think positively when reaching the difficult stage in their lives which is the teenage period. It is highly encouraged by parenting life coaches that

teenagers

Use synonyms

should feel a sense of belonging

towards

Change preposition

to

show examples

their

community

Use synonyms

.

This

Linking Words

could be achieved by involving them to

take

Wrong verb form

taking

show examples

part in free

community

Use synonyms

services

such

Linking Words

as planting in the

neighborhood

Change the spelling

neighbourhood

show examples

, painting their school walls or

help

Wrong verb form

helping

show examples

in renovating houses of the poor. The

rewarding

Replace the word

reward

show examples

and happiness these

community

Use synonyms

jobs will have on its user will build confidence in those

teenagers

Use synonyms

and encourage them to live in

this

Linking Words

world with a great cause.

This

Linking Words

could

also

Linking Words

be a good trial to experience and try different hobbies that can open doors for future jobs. Many communities struggle

from

Change preposition

with

show examples

juvenile crimes. We are witnessing wars and economical

struggle

Fix the agreement mistake

struggles

show examples

where

teenagers

Use synonyms

are getting involved in drugs and sexual

harassments

Fix the agreement mistake

harassment

show examples

and abuse. In

this

Linking Words

case

Add a comma

,case

show examples

a paid

community

Use synonyms

service will encourage these undisciplined youngsters to spend their time in a rewarding

job

Use synonyms

where they can feel responsible

towards

Change preposition

for

show examples

themselves and others. Another factor of having a paid

job

Use synonyms

is the hours needed to spend on a certain task. As an example, if a certain

community

Use synonyms

service

job

Use synonyms

demands several hours or weeks for the task to be fulfilled, an amount should be paid as compensation

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the time spend. In conclusion, I think not all

community

Use synonyms

services should be

an

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

unpaid

service

Fix the agreement mistake

services

show examples

. Depending on the circumstances of those

teenagers

Use synonyms

an organization could take the lead and

responsibility

Replace the word

responsible

show examples

to decide whether

this

Linking Words

job

Use synonyms

should be paid or not. As mentioned,

this

Linking Words

depends on many factors

such

Linking Words

as hours needed and

nature

Correct article usage

the nature

show examples

of the task required.