some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise. Others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, teenagers have not got enough

exercise

in their lifestyle. They depend on many factors like the internet or social media, ….. On many forums, some people think that family has a huge effect on the encouragement of taking regular

exercise

. Others say

school

is the best place to take these

exercises

for

students

. Personally, I think both of them have the same responsibility for the encouragement of

students

’ regular

exercise

.

First

of all, from my viewpoint, parents are the main role model so they have a major impact on the student who spent almost their childhood with their parents. For that reason, what the parent does or watch will have a big effect on their child.

For example

, should the parent spend about one hour to take regular

exercise

, the

children

will imitate them and make it as their parents have done before

.

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Moreover

, spending a lot of

time

encouraging

children

to take regular

exercise

also

gives them more

time

to share their thinking, and desires,…. with their

children

. Other people,

however

, argue that schools should bear the main responsibility.

Children

spend most of their

time

in

school

, at

this

time

,

children

will have lots of lessons included of physical

exercise

lessons.

This

will be the best

time

for

children

to learn and have some

exercises

because they will have more motivated when they do them with their friends. The mandatory lessons

also

help

children

concentrate on their work than they do them alone at home. I personally feel that

school

and family need share the responsibility in taking

children

’s

exercises

.

For example

, if

students

just do the

exercise

at

school

and after ,that they don’t do it when they come back home, they will not find inspiration in these sports.

School

and family need to connect together to encourage their child to take regular

exercises

daily. As we have seen, both groups have an important role in encouraging

students

to take the

exercises

regularly, they should make an attempt to help

students

have a strong health