Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

It is argued that extreme arrangements and activities are becoming more dramatically popular among people. In my perspective,

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interest in risking is a great source of new impressions and unfamiliar

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emotions,

thus

being a positive trend for society.

Firstly

, people undertake risky

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, because

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activity helps break out of routine and brings adrenaline.

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source of new impressions

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extreme

sports

.

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, every year commercial survival TV shows, especially popular in Asia, have

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number of participants that are willing to undergo

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dangerous

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of

sports

for money, adrenaline and fame.

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, in my opinion,

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extremes is a positive feature, because it brings fresh new emotions and helps to reboot the mind from routine.

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it is evident that participating in a life-or-death event help patients with even the worst symptoms like suicidal

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and depression overcome redundancy of life and re-evaluate reasons for existing.

As a result

of

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experience, many people get the desire to live again and avoid their suicidal pasts or hospitals. To summarize, the uprising trend and interest in risky

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significantly evident today,

although

it can be potentially very damaging.

Therefore

, the idea of undertaking extremes can be supported, because it brings new memorable impressions and adrenaline. After

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analysis of

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subject, I have come to a conclusion that

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is a positive trend for society

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since it helps form new positive emotions and break from routine.