An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

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Dear Ravi, I am excited to write

this

letter as I got to know about your's upcoming trip to my place and I cannot wait anymore to meet you.

Hence

, I would recommend you to come during the winter as

this

can be the best time to see mesmerizing theme parks and spectacular waterfalls which are going to be very active in mid of winter only.

In addition

, I have my vacation plan during the same time despite my busy schedule at my workplace.

However

, you are going to have a new experience at my place and I am wondering if your's accommodation and other requirements if any which I do not know yet.

Furthermore

, we have different types of flats available in which a few are with full furniture and others are with limited items Having said that, please do not hesitate to let me know your choice and any other specific needs during your stay.Undoubtedly, you are going to have blown away during the trip and I have prepared our trip throughout the week right from the high-rise buildings to ancestor places which are very special with phenomenal views. I look forward to seeing you soon and making

this

happen with great success all the way. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Tue Aug 23 2022

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