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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be death of grammar and spelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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 contemporary world, it is argued that
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 the advanced technologies in communication
grammar
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 and spelling come to an end. I partially agree with
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 idea and in
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 essay, I will try to draw some conclusions. On the one hand, it is confirmed that online communication is short and basic, and can lead to the death of
grammar
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. In my opinion,
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 type of messaging is really convenient for
people
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, since there are special programs and apps on phones that help
people
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 to write properly, namely, T9. If
people
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 write words wrong, t9 will correct it. And,
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, communication will be maintained without damaging spelling.
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, thanks to instant messengers,
people
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 can learn a new language and learn how to construct sentences correctly.
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, up-to-date technologies make
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's lives easier.
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, it is believed that modern messengers can lead to the death of spelling. Since
people
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 will talk with each other on their electronic devices, and applications will correct them, they just simply forget how to spell words. What is more, they will not be able to construct a sentence properly without apps.
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, the rules of punctuation, which help to properly formulate a thought, are forgotten. Take Telegram as an example. A huge number of both old and young
people
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 use
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 messenger on a daily basis. Since Telegram helps the public to correct their mistakes, they lose basic concepts.
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, modern devices make
people
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 lose basic
grammar
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 rules. In conclusion,
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 I believe that instant messengers help
people
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 to live
easier
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, I would
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 argue that up-to-date devices encourage the public to forget basic rules of
grammar
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 and spelling.
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