Some people think that modern technology has made shopping easier. Others disagree with this. Discuss both sites and give your opinion.
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Modern
technology
has made people
’s all walks of life easier and faster as well as shopping. Some individuals hold the opinion that because of modern technology
shopping become
Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
more
easier while others oppose Change the word
apply
this
view. In this
essay
I will discuss both sites and I think due to digital Add a comma
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technology
shopping become more
easier.
Those who are in favour of shopping turned to easier assert that online shopping become more convenient with technological development. Change the word
apply
People
can purchase products
from home without going shopping mall that is
not possible in previous
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the previous
decade
when Fix the agreement mistake
decades
technology
is not so advanced. This
helps people
to save a
valuable time and energy which Correct article usage
apply
needed
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is needed
for
go to Change preposition
to
shopping
centreCorrect article usage
the shopping
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, as a result,
as a result
they can use this
time in
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for
another activity
possible leading to help Fix the agreement mistake
other activities
people
to improve their position. Moreover
, people
can purchase a
various Correct article usage
apply
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
product
by using Fix the agreement mistake
products
technology
which is not available in
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apply
near
shopping Add an article
a near
the near
mall
. Fix the agreement mistake
malls
For example
, there are lots of page
available Fix the agreement mistake
pages
in
Facebook and Change preposition
on
also
various kinds of cloths
gather here. If you order Correct your spelling
clothes
this
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this product
these products
products
, they will deliver on
your home. Change preposition
to
Therefore
, modern technology
turned to
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apply
shopping
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shop
more easy
.
Replace the words
easier
On the other hand
, other people
oppose this
view and think that some businessman
are misusing it. They are frauding Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
with
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apply
Add an article
the consumer
a consumer
consumer
by using Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
technology
. Some businessman creates Facebook
page where they show lucrative Add an article
a Facebook
products
, but when people
order it
, they deliver Correct pronoun usage
them
the
product which is not Correct article usage
apply
original
product of Add an article
an original
brand
possible leading to take a huge amount of money. Correct article usage
the brand
For instance
, A few days ago, I got a duplicate watch of
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from
famous
brand called Rolex which I order on a Facebook page and it consumes a great amount of money. Add an article
a famous
the famous
Thus
, some businessman
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businessmen
cheating
with customers by using digital Wrong verb form
cheat
technology
.
In conclusion, some peoples think due to technology
purchasing products
become easier while others disagree with this
. I think that the advantage of modern technology
on
shopping is more than the disadvantage.Change preposition
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