Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as a unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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I am more inclined to agree with the notion that it's way better to do "trials and errors", and get to learn from them
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of giving up and doing nothing about it. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss both points of view as well as address my own opinion about
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To begin
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with, I am of the opinion that destiny is divided into two. The
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ones are the certain things that are not in our control,
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as where we were born, and who our parents are. The
second
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type is about the things that are fully under our control,
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as choosing a job or a spouse. I believe that the latter type is 100% our responsibility, and,
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, everyone should cultivate the idea to do something about it, and struggle for it so that they will acquire an enjoyable and more fulfilling life.
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, the idea of doing nothing and waiting for a miracle to happen is very illogical and irrational.
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, when it comes to doing a job,
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, people on average will spend around 8 hours working, which is one-
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of our day, and
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will
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represent roughly 30% of our life. If our job was not something that makes us feel convenient and fulfilled, it would induce some awful consequences for ourselves, both physically and mentally. To sum up, I couldn't agree more about the idea that people should push harder toward everything
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in their control so that we could become happy.
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to that, human beings would have better generations, in terms of the quality of the people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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