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Everyone should stay in school until they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that all children before 19 years old should not leave
school
, and I disagree with
this
 opinion. On the one hand, the argument that schools are necessary for children has some reasons.
First
 of all, children in
school
 can be protected from diverse threats by people there
such
 as their teachers.
For example
, there are some
school
 nurses, who can help students when they are hurt.
Moreover
, there are some
school
 counsellors, who can help them when they suffer from mental pain that they cannot solve themselves.
Secondly
, they can practice before they go into the world. In there, if they make any mistakes, it should do other people harm.
therefore
, youngsters should shoulder responsibility for all of their own acts. While, in
school
, all of their own acts are regarded as one of the practices acted before they do
this
 in society.
On the other hand
, leaving schools give youngsters many advantages. In the
first
 place, youngsters can find the fields fit for them. They can do various works directly, and, in
such
 processes, they are easy to find their own talents which can know in
school
 that provides education fit for average level. The
second
 merit is that the young gain new direct experience. When they go into the world, they face new people and situations different from what they face in
school
. The young can grow, facing
such
 things. In conclusion,
although
 schools can give the young many benefits, experiencing society can give them more advantages.
Thus
, I argue that experiencing society should be encouraged.
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