Demands of food is increasing worldwide, what are the causes of this ? what measures can the international community take to make sure the food supply is enough?

Food
request is being
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around the globe .some new methods and ideas in
agriculture
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the agriculture
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industry
and
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lifestyle
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life style
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should be used to figure out the consequences . Increasing the whole world population is the
first
reason that
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to my mind .developments in medical sciences
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increased awareness about hygiene ,causes higher health level .diseases and natural disaster side effects have been controlled and predicted .all in all lead to dramatic growth in human population .more population means more demands of
food
. Another reason seems to be is businesses which encourage consumers to use their products more and more, including
food
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industry
. wide variety of
food
products and
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high amount of profit which they earn in
food
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industry
has proved
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. In my
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there is no way but
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food
supplement
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.
firstly
,
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agriculture
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the agriculture
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industry
.
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replacing traditional ways
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farming with high technology methods. Modern agriculture machinery could help farmers more than human force .watering system should be optimized .above all using modified seeds could guarantee the expecting measurement of crops. farming pests are other issues that should be studied basically because they could
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all the farming process.
secondly
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the amount of
food
that each individual really needs and
food
storage methods should be modified
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In conclusion
demands
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of
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food
is a real subject to worry and as soon as possible governments have to find the right solutions in different criteria
such
as those has been mentioned above to solve the problem.
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