Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sport. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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advertising by athletes has been promoted over the past years. there is an opinion that says these commercial companies bring many profits which influence sportsmen. in my belief,
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aforementioned topic has many merits but we can not deny its drawbacks which I will consider now in the below essay.
firstly
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, financial challenges are an integral part of the sports sector which every individual sportsman has involved. these problems can interfere with professional and sporty activities and become a reason to distract
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unintentionally.
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, commercial departments with economic sponsoring, address the lack of equipment and, abolished the money concerns.
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, these benefits do not limit to the sports industry but it making certain profits for supporting company owners and their brands.
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, they can link their names to well-known
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and, use
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as a tool for reaching fame and rich. in another word, linking the company and
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bring many threats to sport and vice versa. it can be mentioned that some businesses advertise harmful products which are attracted sports fans ranging from youngsters to the elderly.
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, these health problems could be changed people's perspectives and eradicated the reputation of
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.
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, it can be heard misbehaving and corruption is scandalized. these immoral dilemmas will have negative consequences
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as decreasing product sales. in conclusion, I believe in some cases, would be impressive and can solve economic problems for those who can not afford it,
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, it is irrefutable that the reputation and condition of both sides related to each other that it is not always pleasant.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sponsorship
  • advertisement
  • financial support
  • visibility
  • popularity
  • athletes
  • excel
  • healthy competition
  • commercialization
  • fair competition
  • profits
  • well-being
  • exclusion
  • less popular sports
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