You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my sincere interest in securing gainful employment through your agency. My name is Harsh Desai, and I have recently completed my master's at the University of Waterloo in Electrical Engineering.
Also
, I cleared my Industrial Electrician exam last
month.
I am particularly inclined toward the jobs that are related to automation, aligning with both my passion and strengths. Also
, I will be more than happy to work as an electrician in a company where I can develop my skills.
I worked as a Control Engineer in Dare Foods from January 2021 to March 2024, where I got promoted twice in year. Merely a month after I joined, I got the title of "Shining Star of the Month," which was very rewarding for me. I have also
published two papers that focus on improving the efficiency of plant machines.
Thank you for considering my application. I am anticipating a positive response from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsh DesaiSubmitted by harshdesai305 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and transitions smoothly to the next, enhancing readability and flow.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistent and professional tone throughout the letter to align with the context of employment.
complete response
Address each point listed in the task in sufficient detail, providing relevant examples and explanations.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite