It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

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progress.In

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contemporary era,there is an irrefutable debate

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among

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folk concerning the issues and assets of innovation.There are copious inhabitants who think that old things and rules should not be touched.Just as a coin has two sides,there are merits as well as

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demerits

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been a paramount factor to live a better life with

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richest country in the world

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because they prefer new gadgets

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human beings .

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one thrive and excel in various modes.

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innovations

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have been a bone of contention ,especially for elders who need physical meetings and care.

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enough exercise to stay healthy which lends an air of tremendous diseases like depression.

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metropolitan or modern areas ,as they don't use innovations, prefer

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for travel and held physical meetups

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of video calls.Regardless,these factors cannot be wrong to promote

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view. In the nutshell,according to the

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against

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customs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

322 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adaptability
resilience
stagnation
opportunities
personal growth
development
instability
stress
comfort zone
predictability
innovation
technology
quality of life
flexibility
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