It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

Interchange is a key to

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progress.In

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contemporary era,there is an irrefutable debate

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among

amoung

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among

folk concerning the issues and assets of innovation.There are copious inhabitants who think that old things and rules should not be touched.Just as a coin has two sides,there are merits as well as

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demerits

of interchange.

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outweigh the cons in the

next

forthcoming paragraphs.

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first

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are bountiful judicious.The most

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preponderant

is that undeniable nothing is permanent in

this

world except swap.

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,nature is the best model of

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,the day needs interchange to switch in to nigh,all in all, climate changes ;in essence,to cherished people.

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,the invention of ground_breaking gadgets

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been a paramount factor to live a better life with

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efforts

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past.

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a recent survey, stated that

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China has become

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richest country in the world

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because they prefer new gadgets

such

as

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reports

and

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,which work

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faster or better

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human beings .

As a result

,these subjects cannot be denied.

On the other hand

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one thrive and excel in various modes.

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,the

innoventions

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innovations

like

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have been a bone of contention ,especially for elders who need physical meetings and care.

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on machines to

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pursue

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modern

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,they wouldn't be

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enough exercise to stay healthy which lends an air of tremendous diseases like depression.

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metropolitan or modern areas ,as they don't use innovations, prefer

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for travel and held physical meetups

instead

of video calls.Regardless,these factors cannot be wrong to promote

this

view. In the nutshell,according to the

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aforenamed

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,despite having some

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against

like loss of our traditions and

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customs

customers

,depression of not having strong bonds;whereas,the comfort and ease due to swap surpass the against.