People today shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet instead of face to face communication. Is it a positive or negative development？

Nowadays, many

people

argue whether

people

depending on the

Internet

to buy, work, and contact

with

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others

instead

of the face to face interaction is beneficial to us or not. Using the

Internet

brings us a more convenient daily life but it

also

leads to some problems . It is clear that the

Internet

constructs a more convenient and instant generation.

First

, it saves us a lot of time. If we want to contact someone, we just have to send messages through the

Internet

. It

also

provides us with more choices. When I need to buy something, I can search online to choose which is the most suitable for me. There are plenty of resources that we can use on the

Internet

.

For example

, when I was preparing for IELTS tests, I found plenty of teaching and practice materials that can improve my English ability.

However

,

on the other hand

, there are amounts of disadvantages resulting from the

Internet

. One negative aspect of the

Internet

is the addiction to the

Internet

.

People

are obsessed with the virtual world formed by the

Internet

, which let them forget to act with

people

in the real world, and

this

may cause mental illness when they find they don't have a close friend or family member who can take care of each other. Another serious problem is a lack of focus. We are usually distracted by messages, short films, or videos when we are talking to

people

or searching online, and it is the main reason why we usually can't go into

a

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deep conservation with

people

or finish our work on time, which can decrease our satisfaction and increase our pressure and anxiety. In conclusion, we

also

know the

Internet

benefits us a lot. But there is a variety of negative influences that we have to face. All of us have to control the

Internet

,

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and don't let it dominate us.