Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution. Others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the present world,

car

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is one of

popular

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transportation so it is attributed to

air

contamination. Some people believe that international

car-free

days

are

an

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useful method of reducing

this

situation, while others think there are some other ways.

The both

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views will be analysed and discussed in

this

essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

Firstly

, the

air

contamination rate will be decreased

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if we have international

car-free

days

.

For instance

, in

this

day, we just only use some kind of traffic which use electric

power

or bicycle

instead

of cars with systems

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fossil energy that

cause

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a lot of pollution in the

air

.

This

is why it can be argued that international

car-free

days

could be

an

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useful method for cutting down the

exhausted

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fumes in the

air

.

Nevertheless

, there is one thing that could

be

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cause more serious affection to the

air

than

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a car

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car

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, it is heavy industrial zones.

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, the coral

power

factories

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factories'

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operation to support these industries will give

to

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the

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environment

evironment

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environment

an enormous amount of toxic smoke. So, there

are

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some

replacement

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for coral

power

factories like wind

power

factories could be an effective method.

Therefore

,

this

make

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it clear that there are some other methods to reduce

air

pollution. To summarise, the idea that international

car-free

days

are an effective way of reducing

air

pollution

have

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strong support

,.

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However

, after analysing both sides, it

clear

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that international

car-free

days

could not be supported. It is

therefore

predicted that the trend of using renewable energy in heavy industries will be

the

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more effective.