You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: • when and where you hired it • describe how the accident happened • what kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the incident which has recently happened to my car. My name is Mr Robert and three months ago, I visited one of your company's outlets, located in the area of Gulshan-e-Iqbal and booked a brand new car, Honda Civic.

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, the car was recently delivered to my registered address but unfortunately, it got indulged in a terrible accident. On Monday, when I came back home from the office in the evening hours, the anti-braking system of the vehicle was starting malfunctioning and suddenly all the tyres got jammed during the ride and it stopped in the middle of the road.

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, due to the high stream of traffic, it was hit by an enormous truck, which was coming just behind it. As a consequence, the trunk and the back bumper of my Honda Civic were totally demolished. You are requested to get them repaired as soon as possible since I have an insurance policy which I bought at the time of booking which says any damage to the vehicle till the period of five years will be covered by the company. Yours Faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

arsalanfarooqned

Aug 24, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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accident
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collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
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evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
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circumstances
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