An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Tom, I was so happy when I heard that you wanted to visit the Netherlands, I think I can show you around when you come when I don't need to work. We can work it

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way : you arrange your stay in Amsterdam on Saturday and Sunday and visit the other cities on other days. I would suggest you book a hotel without a kitchen in zone 4. The price is more affordable there yet transportation is reasonably convenient . Please be reminded a hotel room with a kitchen is much more expensive and not worth the price, there are no tourist spots around there and we are not likely to use the kitchen anyway. The best months to visit Amsterdam are May, June, September and October. The hotels are still not charging peak rates yet and the queues everywhere are not that long.

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, the daytime is long enough and it doesn't rain too frequently. I am looking forward to hearing your plans. I just can't wait to show you the beautiful windmills and canals. Best wishes, Peter

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

184 words

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