A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. HelShe has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give details of the course you took at the university • explain Why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply

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Dear Tyson, I hope you are doing well!! I am happy to hear that you are applying for the same

course

that I studied at ABC University. let me give you some tips regarding the diploma programme. It's a two-year data science programme. By taking

this

course

you will become an expert in computer programming with machine learning and artificial intelligence. ABC University is the top in Michigan state.

Moreover

, it has a good reputation among other universities. It's best known for

this

course

as it was taught by top-notch professionals from Google.

Additionally

, upon completion, you will get to work as an intern for a multinational corporation. Graduating from

this

academy will have a great impact on your both career and resume In order to apply to

this

course

, you need to write a letter of excellence to the committee members to accept your application as well as have a GPA within the required range. I will review your letter before you send them to the educational institution. I hope you find

this

helpful. Best regards, Vivek v

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