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happiness is considered very important in life. Some people think happiness is difficult to define. What factors are important in achieving happiness.

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Happiness
 is considered very important in
everyone
's
life
. In recent studies,
happiness
 is one of the main things for a person to be productive.
Everyone
lives
 a journey connected with the source of
happiness
 and love. It has several reasons why
this
happiness
 will affect each area of human
life
. There is a controversy happening in some people's
lives
, still could not find out, or difficult to define their views on
happiness
. In a survey, few of them are happy with family
life
 and a number of them are social activities and other extra pleasures. It almost depends on the day they have been involved in the activities. The factor mainly important in achieving
happiness
 is whether it is productive or time-consuming.
Everyone
 now is busy with their
life
 schedules so
this
 has vital importance to each one's
life
 to achieving
happiness
. The time we invested in a particular area whether it is productive or made us happy has to find out. People's choice is important
otherwise
 it gives us turmoil and time wasted. considering a time frame or lists that are helpful for a person's
life
 to be happy and successful. The theories suggested or advising us to a complete framework must be carried out in
everyone
's
life
.
This
 will help
everyone
 to be active in society and in their family
lives
. In regard, there is an opposite view are
also
 coming, few the peoples are not finding or achieving
happiness
 in their
lives
, must be a personal experience.
However
, what type of issues pop up there must be a solution for all problems. In Conclusion,
happiness
 is considered to be one of the main sources and a person's
life
. even if it's difficult to define and a better way of understanding sure we can find out
happiness
 in simple ways.
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