Some people prefer renting than buying a home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house?

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In recent times, most
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decide to rent houses
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of purchase residence, the main advantage is that it would help to positively the society's economy and the main drawback  is that
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cannot transform living place, in
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essay, I will discuss both sides. On the one hand, 
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generation consider renting
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home
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because it has common benefits,
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to us, the main benefit is that the community can avoid tax payment because it would help to enhance
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's economy if buy
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own
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people
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must pay house and land tax
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renting a house not pressuring the community economy,
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,
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only have to pay on electricity gas and water bills to rented
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, in the developed world that a prominent number of population live in
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, another merit is that
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could change places anytime if they need because
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can ageist short-distance travel from working places to
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, it would aid to time management and
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work become so easier.
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, the main disadvantage of
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phenomenon is that renting a
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a long-term investment but owing a
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has positive
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if needed money can mortgage a
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or sell whatever you want but renters do not have
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opportunity, renters are not allowed to modify the
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that way, it would affect
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's their day-to-day life,
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, if they would like to paint a room blue colour they can do nothing
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, another negative aspect is that
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must pay on rent the due date if not it would affect their renting history
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renters do not approve to rent residencies if broke something in
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that
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have to pay a huge amount of money. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, renting residents has several merits and disadvantages, owing a
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also
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plays a vital role in its society, it can enforce the right method before implementing it.
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