You have a friend who has always liked the car you currently drive. Now you have decided to sell the car. You think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, * say why you want to sell your car * describe the condition of the car * invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday

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Dear Raman, I hope

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letter finds you in good health. I'm writing to you to let you know that I want to sell the car which you liked the most.

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, I'm very delighted to tell you that I purchased a brand new car

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weekend.

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, I decided to sell the old one. As you liked it very much so I wanted you to purchase

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vehicle if you desire. It is in good condition having new tyres.

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, it has a better average as well. There is no problem with it except you have to change the left side mirror because it has a scratch. It is having model no CXxxxxxx and engine no 42xxxx and three-year-old. Apart from

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, it has all the related documents.

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, I want to invite you to my home and you can check its machinery by yourself. I'll give you

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automobile at reasonable prices. Pay regards to your family from my side. Regards, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

165 words

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