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Why local people do not visit the historical site and museums. Discuss the reasons and give a solution to this problem.

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It is claimed that residents in cities, which have museums and old buildings, are reluctant to
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 these kinds of places due to the fact that they have an opportunity to go there easily and without any effort, which makes them accessible conveniently.
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, some residents in
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 cities might
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 those
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 several times in their childhood.
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, municipalities can encourage them to go there and learn more from their ancients by promoting some exhibitions in those eras.
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 with, one of the reasons that some regional human beings do not
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 the historical attractions in their cities is their accessibility.
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, while it is thought that those places will remain there entire their lives and nobody will destroy them, they are not worried about the lack of opportunity to
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 the heritage
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 as long as they exist nearby.
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, there are some old castles located in Tehran, while many residents have never been there due to their accessibilities.
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, municipalities can hold some events and promote them via social media to attract as many people as possible.
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, if a regional municipality organised an exhibition with an interesting subject in a museum
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 worth visiting, many women and men would go to enjoy the event. Meanwhile, they would tend to know more about the background of the site.
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, organisations can motivate local people in order to see the heritage
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 that their city has. To conclude, while it is observed that the local community does not have a tendency to probe their city's ancient
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 inasmuch as those can be easily in their access, governments can encourage them by convening some special entertainments in those areas and make them become curious about their heritage
sites
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 and museums.
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