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Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

#year #languages #people #life
Many languages will become rare on the earth ,
therefore
 a few groups of people believe that we are amazing with it and
also
 they easily communicate with anyone ,
in addition
 , in my point of view , I disagree with
this
 statement. The
first
 and foremost reason is that every terminology has its own historical status so it is vital for them ,
therefore
 it must be in their particular Nations ,
for example
 , Sanskrit , which is the holier speech in the west of the
world
 , due to the history ,
consequently
 , it
also
 touches the hearts of the people there so it should be there.
Furthermore
 , some families have no knowledge about other speeches ,
therefore
 they have to speak in their native jargon ,
such
 as in many parts of the
world
 , individuals do not know about the
world
 wide terminology so they would communicate in their mother tongue.
moreover
 , we cannot get information about other countries without learning their languages , due to its history books being written
by
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 native language ,
for example
 , we can get prestigious knowledge from old books ,
as a result
 , which is increasing in our mind power.
On the other hand
 , everyone can easily communicate with every person ,
therefore
 the relation between two countries will increase rapidly
such
 as many traders try to their luck abroad due to knowing about English , which can help to improve their communication skills ,
consequently
 , it boosts their country's economy.
Secondly
 , due to the good relationship , we can solve the
world
 war type a worse situation ,
for instance
 , nowadays , the
world
 is facing Russia Ukraine war and it impacts on all over the
world
. In conclusion , wish you respect all languages and give the opportunity to learn native books for everyone and in my opinion , an individual must try to speak
first
 their mother tongue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Endangered languages
  • Homogenization
  • Multilingualism
  • Language preservation
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Global communication
  • Intellectual diversity
  • Ecological knowledge
  • Cultural traditions
  • Communication barriers
  • Preservation efforts
  • Technological solutions
  • Language revival
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