Some people believe that school children should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a controversy about whether

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should wear a

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at school. Some people think children should be free to choose their own

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; some have the opposite

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. I think the advantages of wearing a

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outweigh its disadvantages.

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giving

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equal identities and positions. As we know, the

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you wear can always reflect your financial situation;

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, wealthy people constantly wear designer goods.

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, if there was no

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role at school, it's bound to cause some issues,

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as a comparison between

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in terms of the

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wear. Take me as an example.

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with wealthy parents consistently wear designer products, like Nike, in my old school. And they always mocked the unwealthy

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'

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. At

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point, a

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can prevent

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from comparing their outfits with one another because everyone is wearing the same.

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paying more attention to studies. It's expected that if

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were allowed to dress whatever they want, it's highly possible that they will spend a considerable amount of time on it because they want to present the best themselves.

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,

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could concentrate more on their studies if there was a

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restriction.

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, there are some disadvantages of a

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.

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' individualism can be affected negatively to a large extent. It's commonplace that everyone is distinctive;

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, we have our own tastes in terms of clothing.

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, the existence of a

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forces

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to wear the same

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, which can ruin

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' individualism. In conclusion, I believe the merits of wearing a

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outstrip

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its demerits.