Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

In the past few years,

community

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developed medicine very well. Now is much easier to get high-quality treatment. Since

prevention

is much better and cheaper than treatment, a lot of people agree that spending money on research and cures is unnecessary and it would be better to invest money in preventative measures. I strongly agree with

this

view, because society can avoid dangerous

illness

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.

First

and foremost, the

prevention

of disease partly depends on a healthy lifestyle and self-care. People eat healthy food and regular go to the GYM or do some exercises,

this

lifestyle

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other residents a good example and

motivate

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them to become better,

eventually

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this

will prevent some diseases like obesity or others.

Moreover

, parents give healthy food to their children and encourage them to do exercise or play sports like football or basketball, which

also

will have a good effect on there’s health.

Prevention

of disease has other benefits as well. It is obvious that

prevention

is way better and cheaper than treating diseases ,so it will be easier for doctors and residents themselves, as they will not spend a lot of money to create new medicaments and

then

buy them at an expensive price.

For example

, it is much earthier to eat a specific amount of calories and do exercises, rather than struggle with obesity or diabetes. To sum up, the whole society should prevent diseases rather than cure them, as it will be better, cheaper and easier. As a firm believer in

this

approach, I suggest that people should invest in preventative measures.