At the present time, the populatiom of some countries includes a reltaively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantage of this situation outweight disadvantages?
Nowadays, the majority of several country's residents are youth and the minority are elders. I consider
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has more advantages than disadvantages for several reasons.
On the one hand, nations that have adults more than old people may suffer from many drawbacks likeCorrect your spelling
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