Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A section of society is of the opinion that

leadership

skills are innate characteristics whereas others oppose it.I agree with the latter because it can be learnt.

This

essay will discuss both sides of the argument as well as my stance in the subsequent paragraphs with examples. On one hand ,there are several reasons people opine that

leadership

is an inborn feature.some skills can be seen that

run

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in the family.

For example

,Shatta wale is a famous musician because he was born into a family of musicians.Both his mother and father are famous artists.

Moreover

, a person who is a leader starts from their children by how they organise people .

On the other hand

,I and some schools of thought opine that

leadership

can be learnt.There are instances a person is not born into a family of leaders but turns out to be a good leader.Individuals attend schools to able to learn how to manage individuals.

For instance

,to be a president of a country,one should have a good educational background.

Furthermore

,it can be acquired by Votes.To illustrate,in nursing training to be a president or financial secretary people must vote for the individual before. In conclusion,

This

essay argued both sides of the argument about whether

leadership

skills are learnt or developed.

Although

some schools of thought and I believe that

leadership

can be acquired by Votes and hard work,others opine that it innate characteristic.

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4 paragraphs

229 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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