Nowadays the way many people intereact with each other had changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
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technology
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Telecommunication devices are being improved. This
allows societies to get connected each
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technology
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, I truly believe this
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people
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people's
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would be better in the future.Submitted by writingtest7777 on
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