Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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These days,
people
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can purchase any
kinds
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of
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foods
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food
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from supermarkets
with
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affordable
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price
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prices
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.
This
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is because our economy is getting more and more globalized and industrialized. So, the owner of supermarkets can import demanded food from other
countries
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in
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cheaper
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a cheeper
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cheeper
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cheaper
price
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compared to locally provided
foods
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. In my opinion,
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is
positive
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development for
consumers
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because of two reasons. To start with, some vegetables and fruits are difficult to grow up in cold weather, so the
quality
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of these goods
are
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worse in some
countries
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.
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, in
Japan
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we are relying on importing a specific fruit which is
banana
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bananas
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from
Philippines
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the Philippines
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. Generally banana is a kind of tropical
fruits
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fruit
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, so it is easy to cultivate in tropical islands like
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the Philippines
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and Indonesia.
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, it doesn’t grow up in Japan because the temperature is quite cold during
winter
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the winter
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season. The
quality
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of
banana
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bananas
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is better in tropical islands because
it
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absorb enough ultra violate during day time and superb
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nutrition
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nutritions
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from
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in
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entire
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year.
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, importing better
quality
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foods
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from other
country
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countries
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is
good
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development because
consumers
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can taste the
high
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high-quality
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quality
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foods
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that they used not
to try
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before.
Secondly
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,
consumers
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take the advantage of
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cheaper
cheeper
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cheaper
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price
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prices
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for imported
foods
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compare to locally
produced
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onesproduced
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.
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, there
are
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not enough land for growing up
lemon
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in Japan, so
total
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amount of cultivation is small and the
price
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will
be
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higher
compare
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to the imported one.
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of
technology
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improvement, cultivation cost is extremely
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cheaper
cheap
cheeper
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cheaper
in other
countries
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.
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, there are gigantic land and stable temperature in Mexico so
people
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in
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apply
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there can cultivate
large
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a large
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amount
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amounts
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of
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lemon
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lemons
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efficiently. In fact, the
price
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of imported
lemon
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is almost half
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price
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the price
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of Japanese
lemon
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.
Thus
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,
consumers
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can buy the same food
with
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at
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cheaper
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a cheeper
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cheeper
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cheaper
price
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for
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the imported one. In conclusion, buying imported products from other
country
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countries
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is
beneficial
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development for
consumers
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. As I mentioned above, importing
foods
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from other
countries
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is beneficial
in
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economically and
people
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can get better
quality
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foods
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too. So,
the
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globalization is
positive
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influence
for
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people
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.
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