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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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A number of people want to leave in the urban
area
 rather than the rural
area
 , due to the advancement of development and I
also
 live in the
City
 so
this
 essay illustrates both viewpoints for the above statement. The
first
 and foremost region is that the basic facility is established more in the
city
 than the village so whenever they are suffering from health problems
then
 they have to go far from there ,
for example
 , in India , 22% areas are there , where medical services not available ,
consequently
 , the migration rate increases for
this
 reason.
Furthermore
 , in the
city
 , education is given by the standard schools , which are professional teachers and another side they cannot get a basic education so I prefer to live in the Big
City
 ,
for instance
 , a job , if we will get an amazing level of academic , we will take a chance in a multinational company for work ,
as a result
 , it will decrease the poverty write in the nation.
Last
 is that we live a luxurious life there more than in the rural
area
 ,
such
 as , in the village , we cannot see good accommodation , malls and theatres so people do not want to live there.
On the other hand
 , if we want natural air or food , we must go to the rural
area
 because where do not develop so we can spend our life there without any pollution ,
for instance
 , a sarve explore that 80% of the car is running in the
City
 road ,
however
 , it is used by them but not more than there.
in addition
 , the government should work on it to develop the basic facility in rural areas,
therefore
 they cannot go far from the village , and they easily get treatment ,
such
 as , in India , the law gives 30% of the national budget to villages. In conclusion , I want to live in the
city
 , due to the good facility but
that is
 the reason , we should not avoid the rural
area
 , which provide a lot of raw material
that is
 Vital for us.
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