some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many argue that higher
education
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institutions
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should choose those with top academic achievements as their
students
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. While other
people
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contend that
education
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institutions
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have to give chances to
people
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who do not record good marks in their previous educations, I believe that all
people
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regardless of their academic statistics should have equal rights to get into any
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universities
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. On the one hand, I can understand why
universities
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are inclined to implement an enrolment selection based on marks.
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aims to ensure that prospective
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are eligible to meet the certain standard established by the university that will affect the output of the institution’s achievements in the future.
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universities
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like Harvard and Standford have stipulated clear
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criteria for
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that want to get into the
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,
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by the high score demand on GRE exam
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. By doing
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, those
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would assure that they accept proper
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that can follow their learning systems and
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contribute
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higher
university’s
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achievements.
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, the
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argument is
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important to be discussed, since the high enrolment standards implemented by
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since
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many
people
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who do not have good academic records to gain chances
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higher
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institution
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.
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, it should
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remembering
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that gaining
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access, including
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the opportunity
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to get accepted
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universities
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, is part of fundamental human rights.
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, it can
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affect the
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of inequality in society when it is solely
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the view
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of
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who can study in higher
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institutions
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.
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with developed countries in
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of economics is due to the lower
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of citizens
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who graduated
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from
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. In conclusion, there are plausible reasons why several
people
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assume that
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should be focused on receiving admissions from bright
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rather than lower-gained academic records.
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, personally, I think every
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notwithstanding their marks should obtain
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equal access to higher
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.
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