some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many argue that higher
education
institutions
should choose those with top academic achievements as their students
. While other people
contend that education
institutions
have to give chances to people
who do not record good marks in their previous educations, I believe that all people
regardless of their academic statistics should have equal rights to get into any universities
.
On the one hand, I can understand why Fix the agreement mistake
university
universities
are inclined to implement an enrolment selection based on marks. This
aims to ensure that prospective students
are eligible to meet the certain standard established by the university that will affect the output of the institution’s achievements in the future. For example
, top tier
Add a hyphen
top-tier
universities
like Harvard and Standford have stipulated clear admission’s
criteria for Change noun form
admission
students
that want to get into the institutions
, revealed
by the high score demand on GRE exam Correct word choice
as revealed
result
. By doing Fix the agreement mistake
results
this
, those universities
would assure that they accept proper students
that can follow their learning systems and also
contribute for
higher Change preposition
to
university’s
achievements.
Change noun form
university
On the other hand
, the second
argument is also
important to be discussed, since the high enrolment standards implemented by universities
since confine
many Change the verb form
confining
people
who do not have good academic records to gain chances entering
higher Change the verb form
to enter
education
institution
. Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
However
, it should bears
Change the verb form
bear
remembering
that gaining Wrong verb form
remembered
education
access, including opportunity
to get accepted Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
in
Change preposition
into
universities
, is part of fundamental human rights. Further
, it can also
affect the widen
of inequality in society when it is solely Replace the word
widening
Add an article
the view
view
of Wrong verb form
viewed
people
who can study in higher education
institutions
. For example
, the main reason why emerging countries are difficult to vying
with developed countries in Wrong verb form
vie
term
of economics is due to the lower Fix the agreement mistake
terms
ration
of citizens Correct your spelling
ratio
graduated
from Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
universities
.
In conclusion, there are plausible reasons why several people
assume that university
should be focused on receiving admissions from bright Fix the agreement mistake
universities
students
rather than lower-gained academic records. Nevertheless
, personally, I think every people
notwithstanding their marks should obtain an
equal access to higher Remove the article
apply
education
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