some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many argue that higher
education
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institutions
should choose those with top academic achievements as their Use synonyms
students
. While other Use synonyms
people
contend that Use synonyms
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institutions
have to give chances to Use synonyms
people
who do not record good marks in their previous educations, I believe that all Use synonyms
people
regardless of their academic statistics should have equal rights to get into any Use synonyms
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universities
.
On the one hand, I can understand why Fix the agreement mistake
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universities
are inclined to implement an enrolment selection based on marks. Use synonyms
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aims to ensure that prospective Linking Words
students
are eligible to meet the certain standard established by the university that will affect the output of the institution’s achievements in the future. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
top tier
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top-tier
universities
like Harvard and Standford have stipulated clear Use synonyms
admission’s
criteria for Change noun form
admission
students
that want to get into the Use synonyms
institutions
, Use synonyms
revealed
by the high score demand on GRE exam Correct word choice
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. By doing Fix the agreement mistake
results
this
, those Linking Words
universities
would assure that they accept proper Use synonyms
students
that can follow their learning systems and Use synonyms
also
contribute Linking Words
for
higher Change preposition
to
university’s
achievements.
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university
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
second
argument is Linking Words
also
important to be discussed, since the high enrolment standards implemented by Linking Words
universities
since Use synonyms
confine
many Change the verb form
confining
people
who do not have good academic records to gain chances Use synonyms
entering
higher Change the verb form
to enter
education
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institution
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institutions
However
, it should Linking Words
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bear
remembering
that gaining Wrong verb form
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education
access, including Use synonyms
opportunity
to get accepted Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
in
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into
universities
, is part of fundamental human rights. Use synonyms
Further
, it can Linking Words
also
affect the Linking Words
widen
of inequality in society when it is solely Replace the word
widening
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the view
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people
who can study in higher Use synonyms
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For example
, the main reason why emerging countries are difficult to Linking Words
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of economics is due to the lower Fix the agreement mistake
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ration
of citizens Correct your spelling
ratio
graduated
from Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
universities
.
In conclusion, there are plausible reasons why several Use synonyms
people
assume that Use synonyms
university
should be focused on receiving admissions from bright Fix the agreement mistake
universities
students
rather than lower-gained academic records. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, personally, I think every Linking Words
people
notwithstanding their marks should obtain Use synonyms
an
equal access to higher Remove the article
apply
education
.Use synonyms
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