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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still fo hungry. Why Is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Hunger
 is a real issue which needs to be solved as soon as possible. The majority of the
people
 around the globe still go hungry, even though, many advanced changes have been made in the field of agriculture.
This
 essay will discuss what is causing
this
, and what measures can be taken to ensure that
hunger
 is killed. There are various issues which lead to the
hunger
 of the
people
, despite all the advances in agriculture.
Firstly
, the
people
 who live far enough and don’t get the
food
 to meet their
hunger
.
For example
, many
people
 around Africa are dying of
hunger
 just because they are not getting
food
.
Secondly
, the supermarket mafia buys all the
food
 from the farmers, which they sell at their markets and make them more expensive, in order to make more money.
For instance
, if all of the
food
 is bought by supermarkets, what will
community
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 around the globe get? Who are not able to afford it. Whilst the problems may seem intractable, there are solutions available. The
first
 solution is that the government should decide on a percentage of
food
 that should be given to poor
society
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 around the world.
This
 would force all the farmers around the world to not sell all of their foods to the supermarkets only. Another solution is that the whole nation should support the poor
people
 to grow their own vegetables and fruits so that they would not go hungry. Proposed limitations on the selling of
food
 and growing own
food
 might just solve the problems caused.
This
 essay discussed the causes why society around the globe
are
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 going hungry, even though, several advances have been made in agriculture. While there are several solutions in hand to alleviate
this
 problem.
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